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7.

Morning broke over Shah Haveli not with peace, but with noise.

The sun had barely climbed over the carved jharokhas when the stillness of the house shattered.

"AYAAAN RAAHEEL SHAAH!"

Yusuf Shah's voice echoed through the long corridors like a warning bell. Curtains fluttered. A pair of pigeons on the balcony flew away in panic. Somewhere, a servant froze mid-step, silently praying for whoever had triggered this storm.

Inside his room, Ayaan groaned and buried his face deeper into the pillow.

"Subah subah Qayamat laana zaroori hota hai?"
(Is it necessary to bring the apocalypse so early in the morning?)

The door flew open.

Yusuf Shah stood there, arms crossed, blazer already on, eyes sharp enough to cut glass. Behind him, Zareen stood with folded hands, trying very hard not to smile, while Dadi watched the scene with suspicious calmβ€”she had raised enough Shah men to know that chaos before breakfast was tradition.

"Utho," Yusuf said coldly. "Hospital ke baad laga tumhe akal aa jaayegi. Lagta hai main galat tha."
(Get up. I thought you'd gain some sense after the hospital visit. Looks like I was wrong.)

Ayaan slowly sat up, hair a mess, eyes barely open.
"Good morning dad. Aaj ka lecture bhi shuru ho gaya?"
(Good morning, dad. Has today's lecture already started?)

"Lecture?" Yusuf scoffed. "Tumhara daily drama episode hai, Ayaan. Aur main uska permanent audience hoon."
(Lecture? This is your daily drama episode, Ayaan. And I'm its permanent audience.)

Hamza walked in, coffee mug in hand, enjoying the show far too much.
"Bro, kal chalte chalte bike se ladne ke baad aaj kis se fight ka plan hai? Sofa? Dining table?"
(Bro, after fighting with a bike while walking yesterday, who's today's opponent? The sofa? The dining table?)

Ayaan shot him a glare.
"Tum chup raho. Tumhari hasi bhi mujhe injury lag rahi hai."
(You stay quiet. Even your laughter feels like an injury to me.)

Dadi tapped her walking stick on the floor. Thak.
"Bas. Subah subah ghar ko akhada bana diya hai. Pehle nashta, phir faisla."
(Enough. You've turned the house into a wrestling arena early in the morning. First breakfast, then decisions.)

"Amma, aap bhi isko support kar rahi hain?" Yusuf protested.
(Mother, are you supporting him too?)

"I'm not supporting him," Dadi replied calmly. "Main bas chahti hoon ki tumhari sugar level nashta ke baad bade, pehle nahi."
(I just want your sugar level to rise after breakfast, not before.)

Zareen couldn't hold it anymore. She turned toward the maid.
"Jaldi chai lao. Aaj lagta hai poora din lamba jaane wala hai."
(Bring tea quickly. It feels like today is going to be a very long day.)

Ayaan slipped out of bed, wincing slightly as he stretched his scratched arm. As he walked past the mirror, his eyes fell on his reflectionβ€”and for a brief second, his smile faded.

Because behind the jokes, behind the chaos, something restless stirred inside him.

His phone buzzed on the bedside table.

One unread message.

Dua.

He didn't open it. Not yet.

Downstairs, voices clashed againβ€”plans, scoldings, unfinished arguments. Shah Haveli was awake now. Fully.

A new day had begun.

And with it, new chaos.

But no one in that house knew that this morning wasn't just noisyβ€”

It was the beginning of a chain of events that would change everything.

For Ayaan.
For Dua.
For all of them.

Because in Shah Haveli, mornings never arrived quietly... and neither did destiny.

__

The hostel woke up slowly. Not with shouting, not with chaosβ€” but with the soft clatter of steel buckets, distant footsteps in the corridor, and the faint azaan drifting in from a faraway mosque.

Dua opened her eyes before the alarm rang. She always did. For a moment, she lay still on the narrow bed, staring at the ceiling fan that creaked with every tired rotation. The room smelled faintly of books, detergent, and last night's tea. Morning light slipped in through the half-open curtains, touching the edge of her pillow like a gentle promise.

This was her space. No raised voices. No orders. No fear of footsteps behind her. She sat up slowly, pulling her shawl tighter around herself. "Bas ek mahina..." she whispered to herself.(Just one month...)

One month to her final exams. One month before internship. One month before she would finally earn the title she had fought for with bloodless wounds and sleepless nights.

Doctor Dua Hashim.

The thought made her chest feel both light and heavy at the same time. She reached for her phone instinctively. No new messages. She didn't know why, but for half a second, she had expected oneβ€”from Ayaan. Then she shook her head lightly, almost scolding herself.

She got up, folded her blanket neatlyβ€”habit born from years of disciplineβ€”and moved toward the washroom. The cold water on her face chased away lingering thoughts. When she looked into the mirror, she paused. Dark circles. Tired eyes. But behind themβ€”determination. "I'm almost there," she said softly to her reflection.

In the mess hall later, Dua sat with Hina, Aashia, and Mariam, her notebook open even while eating breakfast.

"Tu kab relax karegi?" Hina sighed.
(When will you relax?)

"Final year hai," Dua replied with a small smile. "Iske baad poori zindagi relax karungi."
(It's final year. After this, I'll relax my whole life.)

Mariam laughed. "Doctor ban ke free ho jaogi? Jhooth bolna bhi seekh liya tumne."
(You'll be free after becoming a doctor? You've learned to lie too.)

They laughedβ€”but Dua didn't. Because for her, freedom wasn't a joke.

Freedom meant choosing when to sleep. Freedom meant silence instead of shouting.
Freedom meant studying without fear, breathing without guilt, existing without permission.

Later, back in her room, she spread her books across the table. Anatomy. Medicine. Surgery notes highlighted in three different colors. Her world had shrunk into diagrams, definitions, and deadlinesβ€”but she welcomed it.

This world made sense. She pinned her internship preference list to the board above her desk. She had circled one hospital twice.

Far enough. Safe enough. Her own.

As she studied, sunlight climbed higher, bathing the room in gold. Dua leaned back in her chair for a moment, eyes closed, allowing herself one fragile dream.

A future where she healed others. A future where no one could control her. A future where pain stayed in the past. She didn't knowβ€” That destiny doesn't ask before it enters. That freedom often comes right before the fall. That some storms wait patiently until you believe the sky is clear.

Dua picked up her pen again, unaware that somewhere beyond hostel walls, beyond safe routines and careful plansβ€”The threads of her life were already tightening.

And soon, everything she was preparing forβ€”dreams, freedom, strengthβ€”would begin to crumble. But for now, the morning was quiet. And Dua studied on.

__

It had been a full week. A week of silence that felt louder than noise.

Dua didn't come home that weekend. No footsteps in Shah Haveli. No soft laughter in the corridors. No glimpse of her black chadar passing through the garden.

Ayaan had been sure she would come. He kept finding reasons to walk past the front gate, to linger in the sitting room longer than usual, to glance at his phone every few minutes. But the screen stayed quiet. No message. No missed call.

She hadn't even texted him. By the over of weekend, he finally gave in.

Ayaan: Dua, how are you? When will you come home?

The reply came after a whileβ€”simple, calm, unmistakably her.

Dua: I'm good, Ayaan. My finals are just a month away. I won't be able to come.

That was it. No apology. No explanation. Just honesty.

Ayaan exhaled slowly, leaning back against the headboard of his bed. For a moment, something inside him sankβ€”but then, just as quietly, it rose again. He smiled. A soft, proud smile.

He had seen her work. He had watched her bury herself in books, sacrifice sleep, silence her pain just to move one step closer to her dream. Her dreams had always been bigger than everything elseβ€”and he loved that about her.

And he was happy. Truly happy. Happy that she was so close now. Happy that she would finally earn what she deserved. Happy that soon, the world would call her Doctor Dua Hashim.

Ayaan picked up his own book and opened it, though his mind lingered elsewhere. His finals were looming tooβ€”Class 12. The pressure was real, the syllabus endless, but tonight his heart felt strangely light.

And then it hit him. In just one monthβ€” Her exams would be over. Her dream would come true. And he would turn eighteen.

The thought made his lips curve upward.

Uske exams khatam honge, wo doctor ban jaayegi, aur main 18 ka ho jaunga.
(Her exams will end, she'll become a doctor, and I'll turn eighteen.) He thought."

He stared at the page but wasn't really reading.

"Then I will propose her."

He knew it wouldn't be easy. He knew the chances were slim. Maybe she would say no. Maybe she would ask him to wait. Maybe she wouldn't even see him that way.

But he also knew one thingβ€”

Jab tak main use apne dil ki baat bataunga nahi, mujhe kaise pata chalega?
(Until I tell her what's in my heart, how will I ever know?)

How would Dua ever know what she meant to him, if he stayed silent? Ayaan closed the book, resting it on his chest, eyes fixed on the ceiling.

He wasn't afraid of rejection. He was afraid of regret. And this time, he promised himselfβ€” he wouldn't let fear decide his future. Not when love was finally brave enough to speak.

__

The college corridor buzzed with its usual chaosβ€”laughter, hurried footsteps, half-forgotten lectures echoing from open classrooms. Ayaan sat on the last bench near the window, his notebook open but untouched, pen resting between his fingers like a paused thought.

Yasir dropped beside him without warning, slinging his bag onto the desk.

"Bro," he grinned, leaning closer, "tum aaj kal books kam aur ceiling zyada dekh rahe ho."
(You've been staring at the ceiling more than your books these days.)

Ayaan didn't respond.

Yasir smirked. "Achha... yaad aaya. Saturday routine follow ho rahi hai ya nahi?"
(So... still following your Saturday routine or not?)

That got Ayaan's attention.

He looked away, jaw tightening slightly. "Yasir... mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai."
("Yasir, I need to tell you something.")

Yasir straightened instantly. "Oho. Serious tone. Go on."

Ayaan hesitated, then exhaled. "Main... main Dua ko propose karne ka soch raha hoon."
( "I'm planning to propose to Dua.")

For a second, Yasir just stared. Thenβ€”

"WHAT?" he almost shouted, clapping a hand over his own mouth. "Broβ€” finally! Main toh soch raha tha tu shaadi ka card bhejega seedha." ("Bro, finally! I thought you'd invite me straight to the wedding.")

"Shut up," Ayaan muttered, but his lips curved despite himself.

Yasir grinned. "So the great Ayaan Raheel Shah is finally confessing."

Then, his tone changed. The teasing softened.

"Ayaan... can I ask you something?"

Ayaan nodded.

"Dua is much older than you."Β  TheΒ words hit harder than the teasing.

Ayaan's smile disappeared.

"What if she rejects you just because of your age?"Β 

That fearβ€”he knew it too well.

It was the reason he had stayed silent for so long. The reason he had hidden his feelings behind roses and smiles. The reason he had never crossed that invisible line.

Ayaan looked down at his hands.

"That fear... it scares me too," he admitted quietly.Β "That's why I never told her anything," He looked up again, eyes steady now. he continue. "But I'm turning eighteen."Β  "Eighteen is considered mature, right?"Β  He paused, doubt flickering again.

"But what if... just because of that number, she says no?" For a moment, the noise of the college faded. Then Ayaan straightened his back. "No," he said firmly. "I can't keep stopping myself because of fear."

"I want to tell her," he said, voice steady now.

Yasir watched him closely, then smiled. "Age is just a number, bro," he said. "But sincerity... that shows." He nudged Ayaan's shoulder. "Whatever happens, at least you'll be honest."

Ayaan didn't replyβ€”but something inside him felt lighter. For the first time, he wasn't running from his feelings. He was ready to face them.

The final bell rang, echoing through the college corridors like a release.

Students poured out in clusters, laughing, arguing, complaining about exams. Ayaan walked beside Yasir toward the parking area, his bag slung over one shoulder, his mind still tangled in the conversation they'd just had.

Yasir broke the silence first. "So... plan kya hai, Romeo?"
(So... what's the plan, Romeo?)

Ayaan exhaled slowly.Β The plan is simple.

I'll wait herΒ  finals finish. I'll wait for her dream comes true. Then..." He paused, his eyes fixed straight ahead. "Then I'll place my heart in front of her."

Yasir raised an eyebrow. "Full Bollywood mode."

Ayaan smiled faintly. "No. Full honest mode."

They reached the bike. Yasir leaned against it, arms crossed. "Aur agar usne mana kar diya?"
("And what if she refuses?")

Ayaan didn't answer immediately.

"Tab bhi main khush rahunga," he said finally. "its her life its her decision i wont forced her."
(I'll still be at peace)

Yasir nodded, impressed.Β "Just remember one thingβ€”Dua is not an ordinary girl. Her decisions aren't based only on emotions. She thinks very logically, she's independent, and she's also of marriageable age. So don't do anything that might offend her."

Ayaan's expression softened. "Main jaanta hoon."
(I know.)

"She's strong. Stronger than most people I know." He smiled to himself. "Aur shayad... isi liye main use itna pyaar karta hoon."
(And maybe... that's why I love her so much.)

Yasir watched him for a second, then shook his head dramatically. "Yaa Allah, main kis level ke ashiq ke saath dosti nibha raha hoon." ("Ya Allah... what level of a hopeless lover am I friends with?")

Ayaan laughed lightly as he put on his helmet. As the bike started, Ayaan looked once more toward the road leading to the girls' universityβ€”now empty, quiet.

Bas thoda sa aur intezaar, Dua.
(Just a little more waiting, Dua.)

Phir main chup nahi rahunga.
(Then I won't stay silent.)

The bike disappeared into the traffic, carrying with it a boy standing at the edge of courageβ€”unaware that fate was already preparing a storm he could not outrun.

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